by Tink Apr 13, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
I will shar with you my coffe cup |
by Lily
Awh, this well made me smile. : P I think its really rather sweet, Im not the biggest fan of ryming poems but this was really good. |
by pseudo
Very sweet poem! So heartfelt and makes me wanna share :P lol! Makes me smile! Well written! keep it up! =) |
by Tisha
I agree this poem keeps your attention.The flow is good.I bet it put a smile on your boyfriends face when you gave it to him. |
by Dark Kitten
Awwww....... This poem is so cute!!! It really was a good read. My vote has to be a 5 for this poem. Though I would suggest spell check for it. Nice piece of work. |
by Allen
I really do like this poem.. Hehe the feeling are expressed very well and you still got a nice structure. i like it. keep it up. |