There were a few spelling typos you might want to fix. For a repetition poem I really did enjoy it. I'm amazed myself that it kept my attention (sometimes a hard thing to do) The flow was good. I didn't care so much for the ending as I did for the rest of it. I think the best part was about the umbrella and the rain because it could mean that physically and maybe as a symbol for protection from sadness. :)

This had a really good poem. the meaning was really sweet. it was written well. it had me reading. and i love it how you described an umbrella and rain. it was a good symbol to endure to the poem. great stuff

Kat

Aww..that poem was so cute & sweet. totally adorable. i loved it! great job! 5/5**

I really do like this poem.. Hehe the feeling are expressed very well and you still got a nice structure. i like it. keep it up.

Awwww....... This poem is so cute!!! It really was a good read. My vote has to be a 5 for this poem. Though I would suggest spell check for it. Nice piece of work.

-Artimis-

I agree this poem keeps your attention.The flow is good.I bet it put a smile on your boyfriends face when you gave it to him.
Tisha~

Very sweet poem! So heartfelt and makes me wanna share :P lol! Makes me smile! Well written! keep it up! =)

Awh, this well made me smile. : P I think its really rather sweet, Im not the biggest fan of ryming poems but this was really good.
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