Really nice..good job=)

I really liked the poem. It touched my heart!

Omg i loved this..i enjoyed reading it!!! 5/5

Beautiful poem....

Need more excitment

I really like this poem but the last line could be a little stronger. I have trouble with that also but hey Great Job
Nichole Renee

Wow dats really good.... im not old enuf to say.yeah i no...wrinkles...but i never thought of gettin old like dat...dats wats poetrys bou tho rite?? givin oda's ur opinion n perspective!
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sarah k

Your amazing, you should really take your talent somewhere..you'll go far

It's good to age with such srength and confidence. beautifully put 2gether.

regards

Wow... that was really good. i think i know how y ou feel and can relate to the line thanking God for ever wrinkle. :} keep up the good work.

This was quite good in the beginning, it seems to get a tad out of structure towards the end though. I am a bit unsure what yew were trying to say. All in all, I gave it a 4/5, because I did enjoy the beginning and it has a lot of potential.
Take Care,
Ley

Beautiful

I really think this is a beautiful poem, very well writen, Great job.

Great poem i loved it! well keep up the good work i c that u have lots of comments u must b a great writer! :)

Awesome poem!!!!

paula

Great poem.

Hey, good job, i really liked it. keep up the awesome work

Ahh, well I cant imagine there is much for me to say after all those comments! But I just have to say I really love this poem, it seems to really sparkle with something special - truly uplifting. It's really great to see someone looking back in this way.