Dark Thoughts

by Mitch   Apr 13, 2006


These dark thoughts
Filled with hate
My Lonely soul
A victim of fate
Give me a reason
Not to do it
To spare my life
To live through it
These cuts on my arms
Where just for fun
What I'm about to do
Cannot be undone
So as I draw this blade
Down my wrist
And onto the floor my blood drips
I leave this world knowing
I won't be missed

© Mitch 2005

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  • 17 years ago

    by A thousand broken hearts carried by a thousand broken wings

    Hey Mitch I read this poem I feel exactly like this right now. I really like it kepp up the good work if you want to please read and comment on some of my poems. Thanks

    Sara

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Hey nice poem. i dont really do suicide cutting poems, so this dont hold any magic for me. but i do like the first half. = A victim of fate

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Excellent rhyming, really helps it to flow smoothly. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great poem, brilliant flow and very expressive. sure that someone would miss you, i felt like this at the begining of the week and very nearly did something sort of perniment and it wasn't untill then that i realised that there are people who would miss me. sure its the same for you, they are there it's just that youcannot see them. anyway.. back to the poem it flows very well thoughout and really holds the attention of the reader well. the rhymes are subtle and unforced, but still hold the peice together very well

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Awesome poem.. loved it 5/5..

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

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