Ur really good at writing poems...

Good poem, thanks for commenting on myn.. ur a good writer, hope to see more good work from ya.. and your wrong.. u wud b missed.. to someone u cud b the world but u just dnt no it.. dont take that risk eh.. if u wana talk and uve got msn my addys goody2tart@hotmail.com.. ur not alone in this just dnt forget it ok xxshellxx

Awww, This is sad *tear* =] cheer up! It was a good poem! 5/5

luv natalie x-x

Awesome poem.. loved it 5/5..

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Great poem, brilliant flow and very expressive. sure that someone would miss you, i felt like this at the begining of the week and very nearly did something sort of perniment and it wasn't untill then that i realised that there are people who would miss me. sure its the same for you, they are there it's just that youcannot see them. anyway.. back to the poem it flows very well thoughout and really holds the attention of the reader well. the rhymes are subtle and unforced, but still hold the peice together very well

5/5

Excellent rhyming, really helps it to flow smoothly. xx

Hey nice poem. i dont really do suicide cutting poems, so this dont hold any magic for me. but i do like the first half. = A victim of fate

Hey Mitch I read this poem I feel exactly like this right now. I really like it kepp up the good work if you want to please read and comment on some of my poems. Thanks

Sara