As she cries

by Auryn is a guy   Apr 13, 2006


I watch as she cries silently,
her crimson tears run down her face,
from her mouth, from her sparkling eyes,
a vision of true beauty,
lay on the floor.

she stares blankly at me eyes wide,
my eyes well, a single tear runs down my cheek,
as i leave this house,
only to be found by passersby.

i run from this place,
until my legs can\'t take me anymore,
i collapse, onto the ground i fall,
the soft lush grass breaks my fall,
but i am forever falling,
love is always crawling,
under my skin till i retaliate,
till i burst into a frenzy of rage and anger,
sadness.

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  • 17 years ago

    by candyanddirtmakeanoddcombination

    Its beautiful. really. :) hopefully i'll get to talk to you later. cya

  • 18 years ago

    by missblueyes

    I like this poem....all the emotion it has. emotion is always good. it gives it character and meaning.
    Maybe you could check some of mine out tell me what you think! other peeps opinions are good so yeh...:)
    well nice job on the poem!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Savanha

    I liked how much emotion was in it... at least it seemed like a lot :) 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Shuuu

    Heeyy Pirate-Man!
    It is Shuuu again..
    This is good.. I voted! :P 5! Honoured! x

  • 18 years ago

    by AnAstAciA

    You are very emotional and sensitive....i can tell from your poems...if you want to improve...well....SEARCH FIND AND TRY AGAIN...that is my motive anyway!:) keep writing, dont stop...it helps you express your feelings much more easier....great job....5/5

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