Helloooooooo, all of the poems I've read seem not to have a certain number of lines to a verse? It helps it look neater, and can help if you want to rhyme it or want to give each line a certain amount of syllables. It also makes it look neater. :D Love. xx

You are very emotional and sensitive....i can tell from your poems...if you want to improve...well....SEARCH FIND AND TRY AGAIN...that is my motive anyway!:) keep writing, dont stop...it helps you express your feelings much more easier....great job....5/5

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This is good.. I voted! :P 5! Honoured! x

I liked how much emotion was in it... at least it seemed like a lot :) 4/5

I like this poem....all the emotion it has. emotion is always good. it gives it character and meaning.
Maybe you could check some of mine out tell me what you think! other peeps opinions are good so yeh...:)
well nice job on the poem!! 5/5

Its beautiful. really. :) hopefully i'll get to talk to you later. cya