by Twisted Heart Apr 13, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
(From the eyes of a stranger) |
This poem is very good shakespear would be proud. great work |
Wow. Great poem. It did not seem as long as it really is- thats good. That means the reader gets lost in the poem and isn't thinking about when it will be over. The flow was good and the word choice was outstanding. Keep it up! |
by shobhana kumar
Jeannie, this is outstanding. putting it together gives it a story like intensity that readers might have missed reading the fragments apart. |