by David Marshall Apr 13, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I shed my skin, |
by Whisper
Can't put in to words how much I loved it. Good job David! Hooray for you! hehe |
by Biscuit
Another great poem but your poems are a bit 'samey', try experimenting with your talent by applying it to different types of poems ie, a different structure or rhyming pattern and a different topic, im sure the result would be amazing! good luck xx |
Pretty good, i would add some depth, some description to make it even better... otherwise you did pretty well! |