Should\'ve Been

by Monica AKA Mika   Apr 13, 2006


Ive found someone new
someone who dont treat me like you do
He do me right and i dont mean sexually
He actually cares about spending time with me.
He would rather go out then to stay home and chill
And unlike you he freaked out when i took those pills
He calls me baby as another way to show he cares
And unlike you when i need him hes always there
He holds me close and concurs my fears,
while he wipes them you gave me tears
comes to my house to meet my family
Havent you ever thought that this was how its supposed to be?
I dont want to compare you two this isnt a competition you have to win
Im just showing you the kinda boyfriend that you shouldve been.

Dedicated to Keyjuan A. Gillum

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  • 18 years ago

    by Anna

    Your new guy sounds great and the old guy sounds like he treated you really badly, I love the way this poem is basically saying f**k you to your ex!
    5/5
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Still In Pain

    I love it! Keep up the good work.

    Still In Pain AKA Lil Bit

  • 18 years ago

    by colby

    Wow girl this is so good u never know that the guy that u thought was so sweet wasnt really like that!!it suxs but that is what i went through(many times!!)and everytime i learn a lil bit more!!just remeber the ppl that r there for u and dont let a guy push u down!!
    colby~

  • 18 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    *stares in awe* there is so much meaning behind this poem and you put i think what every girl has been trying to say in such a great poem. 5/5 and thanks for the comment:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jadie

    Gurl thank god one of us speaks out i love this poem i can totally relate to it but yes now i have found a new guy that treats me right and i thank god

    god bless misscountry