Oh wow, That was powerfull. Really good though. You got into it really deep, I love poems like this. Spesh how you had it made to make this person feel as guilty as possible. Cause no one says they are sorry untill it's too late eh? Well it was really good! Keep it up 5/5

luv natalie x-x

Wow again, I know those feelings and in your writing i get drawn into your lines and see a different world, Your expressions and emotions are very deep. I write things like this so i dont do things like this, i dont know if ur the same.....but yea you are an amazing writing.