One day...

by J Lau   Apr 14, 2006


I found a new passion,
In this past year.
A way to express,
The true emotions I had.

Letting myself free,
Of all my feelings I held.
Releasing my thoughts,
And allow my mind to speak freely.

These words and thoughts,
Strung together and flowed so naturally.
My true feelings about you,
Flowed like a river of the wild.

How I wish that you will know,
All that is true and real.
How I dream that my wish will come true,
Maybe one day down the road.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Leah20

    Overll good job, I liked the flow of the poem, nice imagery.

  • 17 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    Wow.. your good choices of words is really powerful.. I could feel the emotions.. the love.. really good.. keep up the good work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I like how you didn't rhyme in this poem. It let you say a ton of great things. I enjoy the huge amount of passion you incorporate into your poetry, it makes for excellent pieces. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I liked how you rhymed in this poem & the imagry was beautiful! i liked it alot

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is a good poem..i dont really like reading poems that dont ryhme but i enjoyed this one...good job!

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