Comments : Broken heart

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This poem is sad, I've been there myself, I can relate to every word in that poem, I won't tell the story, Cause its long as, But i'll cut it short, I had two best friends, One was a boy, Then I loved him, And he always lead me on, And now yeah. I'm over him now, And we are friends!

    So keep your head up, Things will be okay!

    5/5 for this one though, I though it was well written!

    luv natalie x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by Marky J

    Hum very sad, but a good poem!

    x

  • 18 years ago

    by mariah

    I really liked your poem it was awsome