I was too blind

by ♥broken fairytales♥   Apr 14, 2006


Every tear that fall from my eyes
every scream of anger because of the lies
every fear trapped in my heart
every piece of pain slowly tearing me apart

the disguise i was forced to wear
the face that your never going to be there
the guts you have to come back again
the sad thing is your still causing me pain

you ripped my life apart
you broke my fragile heart
you lied to me and back stabbed me
you were just to damn blind to see

that night we first met each other
that night we hardly knew one another
that night you said you had fallen for me
that night you made me see

you told me that you loved me
you told me it was meant to be
you told me that you would always care
you told me that at every moment you would be there

I feel such a fool for believing you
i was so under your spell i thought every word was true
i fell for you more than i have before
i though i wouldn't be alone anymore

it was all lies through and through
that word just sums up you
i though you really cared for me
but i was the one that was too blind to see

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  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Good work, though I felt it could do with some tweaks here and there - if you added and took a way a couple of syllables the flow would improve a lot! I like the repetition in it, the first word of every stanza being the same, but I thought perhaps that restricted each line a bit? Other than that I think it's a great poem, and with a bit of work it could be amazing!!
    - Polly xx

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