1 year has passed

by ♥broken fairytales♥   Apr 14, 2006


1 year has passed
without you by my side
1 year has passed
the pain is yet to subside

1 year has passed
and i feel so alone
1 year has passed
you were the one to never moan

1 year has passed
i need you more than ever
1 year has passed
no more laughs together

1 year has passed
and i miss you more each day
1 year has passed
the sadness never goes away

1 year has passed
my heart still feels the pain
1 year has passed
my life's just not the same

1 year has passed
my life is full of heartache
1 year has passed
were you the first to make it break

1 year has passed
no long are my dreams achievable
1 year has passed
now my dreams don't feel believable

1 year has passed
i started to doubt what i can be
1 year has passed
you were the only one to believe in me

1 year has passed
no i don't feel special like u made me feel
1 year has passed
now my life doesn't feel real

1 year has passed
your gone and not coming back
1 year has passed
i wish the alcohol didn't attack

1 year has passed
your gone now forever
1 year has passed
please granddad why can't we be together

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  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Good poem! I think the repetition in it is very effective, as the poem seems to encrypted (sp) within the words 'one year has passed'. Powerful poem, well done and take care
    Polly x

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    I'm not really a fan of repatitive peices like this, though i can see why you used the repition and its potential effect it is not really my thing. other than that though the peice has a lot of good points, the flow is good and tit holds together well thoughout, the rhymes seem unforced and the content very well portrayed.

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