by Natalie
Awwww. This is so sad. I hope you really don't feel that way. |
by Kate
Hye mitch .. this is intense i truly liek it cause it seems sorta liek what i am going through to the point where i wanna be the oen leaving .. sometimes i think boys just play with girls heads then other times i think they are sweet and gentle and wish taht everything was perfect but then he blows me off and tells me he still likes me when i kwno he really doesn't but i'm just a silly little girl and he makes me beleive himand i do .. then i realize how much i am being used |
As usual.. gd poem .. short n sweet sentences. makes it very effective.. xxshellxx |
by Biscuit
A good and well written poem, but its kinda the same as teh others... |
by PS
Dude your rhymes are fantastic. really nice job. i did like these lines: |
by A thousand broken hearts carried by a thousand broken wings
Hey Mitch I really like this poem to alot of your poems ralate to me in a way because Ive been depressed for about 2 years now and it just got worse. Keep it up!! |