I loved this poem and the usage of god and heaven, there comes an extra something when anyone writes about spirituality that i love. you can email me anytime if you so desire just hit the private message thing and ill be sure to respond.

Veryy good!!! also very true!!! ♥

I love ur poem!! My fav line is I'm just trying to get by in this world by being me...i can relate 2 it so much!!! Love ur poems so dont eva stop writing them!!

I can relate to your poem and i think that is what makes it really good. It was well written. I LOVED IT.