Subliminal Love Poem

by Noam Alexander   Apr 14, 2006


In this day of stress and frustration

Longing are we for revelation

Of what of our lives the future may bring

Very uncertain, but true I'll remain

Even when dark skies lead us astray

You can be sure there's a star on the way

Only the best is my wish for you

Until the end may your dreams come true

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  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Damn such a beautiful poem hasn't been voted even, thats so unfair, i just loved it.

    and dont u loose hope, keep writing

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Noam Alexander

    PS: "I love you" is spelled out from the first letter of each new phrase in case you miss it. In itself this is not an original idea, but it is being used as a symbol of the situation.

  • 18 years ago

    by Noam Alexander

    What do you do when you love somebody and they love you, but the words can no longer be expressed?

    Separated by distance and complicated by trying to get her own life together, she says that love is too hard and keeps her from dealing and focusing on things in her control.

    But at the same time, the only thing on his mind is really his love for her.

    He wants to be there for her, but at the same time, he can't abandon his own thoughts.

    So this poem was created which also is a perfect reflection of the actual situation where real thoughts can only be hinted at and not explicitly expressed.

    The poem may appear simple and generic, but there is a deeper meaning to it. At least to me.

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