No One to Love but Yourself

by Bridgette   Apr 14, 2006


Teardrops falling
From a broken heart
An open wound
From where he tore it apart

Mascara stains
Running from her eyes
A poisoned mind
From all of his lies

Silent screams
Bleeding from her soul
Darkest secrets
Never meant to be told

A lonely cry
That was heard by none
Endless pain
That had only begun...

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  • 18 years ago

    by norman

    Nice writing

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    I must agree with the others- it was a wonderfully written poem. Your poetry always lingers and is always very easy to picture because the imagery is very much alive. A quality I love in your poems...5/5 from me....

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    I like how you ended it..

    "A lonely cry
    That was heard by none
    Endless pain
    That had only begun..."

    I think that was a good ending for this poem.

    I give it a 5/5
    Keep it up
    Stay Strong..*

  • 18 years ago

    by Allen

    Really good job, that was a great poem... well written, nice rhymes, goood flow.. I love it. well done..

  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    Wow someone must have really hurt you...i'm sorry but this is good. 5/5

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