by Jon Hunt Apr 14, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I don't know the truths, but neither the lies, |
by Lilly
Gorgeous! the style is different and quite refreshing and it flows perfectly! i'm in love with it! lol your crazy talented!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
by DiscoBore234
Really good........great rhyming |
I found this so wonderful because I know few male poet who write as well as you....this bit stood out: |
by Zomi
Wow Jon, this poem is absolutely amazing. It really takes my breath away. |
by Sarah Ann
Wow this was amazingly beautiful and well written. I can relate so much to the words said here. Everything in this poem fits so perfectly together, keep up your excellent work! 5/5 |