This is an awesome poem..but sad:(. I read your post on the vent thing and its so sad sometimes i feel the same..Everyone thinks i have a great life but they're wrong..There is so much pain i haide from everyone else anyways nice talking to you..you should write lots more i am looking forward to reading more of ur stuff bye

vanessa

OMG! This poem is beatiful! The way it flows, the rythm, the words that are used! You are an awesome writer and i am sure you are an aweseome eperson! Please keep on writing, and don't die ffor our sake (poems-and-quotes.com) cause then we would be missing a great writer witha future!! Love ya!~ 10/5

Please post anohter poem! You say that you have tons, butb you have only posted one! please update soon!

Your poems are really beautiful Brittany! I hope you post more soon!

Hun,
look yes, life is hard and trust me i'm not gonna say it's not but if you need someone to walk beside you and talk to... i am here i know what you mean about people not understanding you.... but if you take the time to talk to me i will try to understand you because i know what it's like.....oh yeah great poem 5/5

Wow girl. This poem is EXTREMELY good. Your use of words is great and very expressful. You have got a real tallent and put your soul into your writing. Good job =)