Great poem, i really liked it!! It was a good one for the foot!! Great job!! I really like your poems!!! Your a fantastic writer!! 5/5!!

Wow great. i love. its so perfect. i totally agree. i absolutly love the last stanza

All you have to do is follow three simple rules,
don't drink, do drugs, or make fun to amuse.
As long as you have respect for others and you,
you will live life on your own, as most others do

the last two gave me shivers

I liked this poem a lot...as well as all your poems...i really don't know what to say....but i agree with poonam i absolutely love the last stanza...it passes a really good message....

It was well written except taht most people don't have a choice but to move back home. A good friend one mine had to until he could get everything in his life back in order. You're word choice was there I just dodn't feel it was your strongest poem.

"To be living at home, when you don't have to be,
is the worst of tortures, I'm sure you'd agree."
that is absoloutley true and terribly hilarious
5/5