OMG.
i love this poem.
it is so deep.
and i can tell it came from your heart.
i'm so sorry for your loss.
and i hope all went well.
fantastic job!
thanks for the comment on my poem.
*rates 5*
bye.

Good job on this poem, and i can really relate to you on this...im sorry for your loss

I thought that was a very sad poem and im glad i read it.it made a cry alittle because instead of dad for me it would be for my 15 yrs. old brother that die when he was 14