Best Friends Forever....Failed

by Lying To Live   Apr 15, 2006


I found the card I wrote to you
In the back of my desk draw
Id left it there, I dont know why
But now I couldnt wait anymore

Inside it reads This year has been wicked
I couldnt have said it any better
Would the same have gone for this year?
If I had of given you this letter

So Many good times the second line
Why did it have to end?
Why must this year change everything?
Why are we no longer best friends?

I laughed more then I have before
The truest line in the card
The year I will never forget
Moving on is going to be really hard

Love Lynzi My usual sign off
P.S me and you best friends for life
Because this line isnt true anymore
I have once again turned to the knife

The first fight we ever had
And the ending was made
No longer me and you till we die
Id lost the only true best friend Id ever had

A few words slipped from our mouths
That a sorry could never fix
Weve gone our separate ways now
On our own for about eight weeks

Well I suppose everything happens for a reason
We were meant to go different ways
But however hard I try I will not be able to
Stop thinking about you everyday

plz comment ...i know it sounds cliche but it truely means alot XoX

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  • 18 years ago

    by smile

    This is really good
    i love the whole thing
    the emotions in this poem stand out really well.
    well done

    thanx for commenting on my poem!

    XxXxsmilexXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by fairygirl

    Wow thats beautiful!!!!!!!
    really beautiful
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by lonelynow

    I've been through this, and you have turned it into poetry much better than i did. my poem was really violent, this is simply beautiful.

    keep writing hun, never stop

    lonelynow xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee Kotva

    A really good poem, I enjoyed reading it. I really hope you haven't turned to "the knife" like you said for it only makes things worse, yet it feels like that is the only thing left; its really not. I hope you and your friend can work things out. And you get better soon.
    God bless
    Renee