A really good poem, I enjoyed reading it. I really hope you haven't turned to "the knife" like you said for it only makes things worse, yet it feels like that is the only thing left; its really not. I hope you and your friend can work things out. And you get better soon.
God bless
Renee

I've been through this, and you have turned it into poetry much better than i did. my poem was really violent, this is simply beautiful.

keep writing hun, never stop

lonelynow xxx

Wow thats beautiful!!!!!!!
really beautiful
xxxx

This is really good
i love the whole thing
the emotions in this poem stand out really well.
well done

thanx for commenting on my poem!

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