by JODIE ROMAN Apr 15, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Secrets, secrets |
by Naerwen
Ah yes, end of innocence, a phrase i am very familiar with. This is a brillant poem. i especially liked the repetiton emphasising the reoccuring sadness that losing our innocence does. the feeling of stepping out into a world without the innocent, and the sometimes devastating effects of this. Great write, 5/5 |