by Darien Apr 15, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
This Time, I Win |
by Jenni Marie
This is yet another favourite. I really hope you never give up writing, i'm going to add you to my favourites also. 5/5 |
by 111308
Awww! This Was Really Good! I Could Feel Everything The Way You Exspressed It Was Really Good! Amazing Flow...Your Work Is Deff A Piece Of Art! 5/5 |
by Stephanie
Wow, another great job again! You're an amazing writer! Keep it up! 5/5 |
by Natalie
W.O.W I can't even pick a favourite part, I loved it all. I can relate heaps, but in different way I think. It was really good. Nothing in there that I rekon needs to be changed. Awesome job again, 5/5 keep it uppp =P |
by Little Dot
You always have really strong emotion in all of you poems. It makes them really stand out from other peoples. You had a good rhyme scheme. |