Great poem!! everything flows nicely.. i can so relate to this poem.. 5/5
*rachel*

I have a feeling,
we'll make it work.
We want to commit,
not make it hurt.
^^ i absolutley loved that stanza because a lot of people aren't even commited to their relationships and its great to see you want to be!!

At times I have doubts,
and think its a game.
Im in this for love,
& not the pain.
^^^ I also LOVED This stanza, something about it that makes me want to interuppt you and clap my hands!

And the last stanza! WHAT A WAY TO END THE POEM! I defiantly enjoyed this write! It shows that even short poems can come across powerful!
Terrfiv job! 5.5
Chelsey-Lynn

Haha thats funny and of course i love it..
hey you know what.
im in love with jusin we should celebrate woohooo hahha
u kne wthat already the bells going to ring i shall see you uh.. ur rught beside me so whenever i turn my head..
i love you

Chelsee