Pain.. My Symphony

by Dark Kitten   Apr 15, 2006


It's been a painful symphony to sit through
Since the first day the tears took over you
Tear after tear, I held you tight
Only to be struck down and lose the fight

Every time I tried to help, you blamed it on me
You cried and you screamed, made a fool of me
Every time you've hurt I've taken the brunt
If only I had been much, much more blunt

The string of my heart plays one more time
Left corner to sanity, straight a mile nine
It won't make sense left alone
So I'll play my chord down to the bone

It's been a painful symphony to sit through
Ever since the darkness took over you
Punch after punch, I stood tall
Only to be struck down and take the fall

When you shunned me away it broke my heart
The simple look in your eyes, it tore me apart
Hurt after hurt, I took a lashing
Till you left me alone, with my eyes flashing

The drum of my heart plays one more time
Left corner to sanity, straight a mile nine
It won't make sense left alone
So I'll play this one beat down to the bone

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  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Wonderfully written...amazing job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aw jeez, This was really good. It kinda made me think.. About how much I could be hurting my best friend for how I feel. But anyways, Back to the poem, I thought it was great! It had a great flow to it, And it was very meaningfall. Keep it up 5/5

    luv natalie x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    I LOVE the use of music, extremely original...
    You rhyme me with me at one point but apart from that I can't think of anything bad

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetically Speaking

    Wow thats a nice poem, I lovr how it ends, I love the whole feel. A symphony... how perfect...

  • 18 years ago

    by Kalika

    I liked it, although very sad.

    I found it a mite predictable due to the choice of rhyming scheme.

    However, it was still a marvelous poems, and I hope you write many more.

    Kalika