Fantastic poem, great job, def got my 5 vote, keep writing and take care sarah

I liked it, although very sad.

I found it a mite predictable due to the choice of rhyming scheme.

However, it was still a marvelous poems, and I hope you write many more.

Kalika

Wow thats a nice poem, I lovr how it ends, I love the whole feel. A symphony... how perfect...

I LOVE the use of music, extremely original...
You rhyme me with me at one point but apart from that I can't think of anything bad

Aw jeez, This was really good. It kinda made me think.. About how much I could be hurting my best friend for how I feel. But anyways, Back to the poem, I thought it was great! It had a great flow to it, And it was very meaningfall. Keep it up 5/5

luv natalie x-x

Wonderfully written...amazing job.