As death comes

by Coral   Apr 15, 2006


I'M LAYING AWAKE ON MY
BED
THINGS OF THE FINAL WORDS YOU SAID
I START TO CRY AND FALL
APART
I HOPE YOU CAN SEE MY BROKEN HEART
YOU LEFT ME HERE SO MY END ILL DECIDE
YOU LEFT ME HEAR TO MY
DEMISE
I MAKE SURE THAT I CLOSED MY
DOOR
THEN GRAB MY BLADE, LIE ON THE FLOOR
THE PAIN TOO MUCH THAT I CAN'T IGNORE
SO I DRAG THE BLADE ACROSS MY WRIST
I DIG FARTHER SO I'M NOT ABLE TO
MISS
I HOPE YOU CAN SEE ME IN THIS STATE
AND NOW THAT THIS WAS MY FINAL DAY
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COMMENT PLZ I WANNA KNOW HOW IT IS THX EVERY1

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  • 18 years ago

    by Victoria

    Wow this really got to me.. you shed a light on a few things for me thanks you rock
    keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Omg i luv all ur poems 5/5 4 all of em

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Very good poem. The way it flows by is great. But it's kinda sad..*takes your knifes and sharp stuffs and throws it away* Don't hurt self

  • 18 years ago

    by Coral

    I WANT HIM BACK BUT CANT HAVE HIM. SO WHY DONT I GO TO HIM? BECUZ NO ONE WILL LET ME :(