This is pretty good for a free-verse poem. there is strong imagery and u evoke strong feelings in your line breaks

Lindz

Very well written Ley. the emotions come out so strongly in this - very raw; but wonderfully portrayed.

thank you very much for your comments on my work. i really appreciate it.

love and peace
shobhana

You really written soo very good i cant even find a word to describe how beautiful you wrote those lovely poem, as lindz mentont it there is strong imagery; so keep up the good job...

Much love from

Jammal