by Darien Apr 15, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Calm After the Storm |
by Natalie
Aw. This was really good. Loved it how you compared it to the storm and sun, and when then sun came, your parents came and aplogised. A really good poem, with alot of emotion. Loved it. 5/5 keep it up! |
by dora
Daniel an0ther t0uching piece. l0t 0f em0ti0n in this. very well written.. h0pe ur 0hk |
by Cuddles
Awesome! The ending is great, leaving the reader with hope. Well chosen words, nice flow...Great job! |
by Melissa
This is great, Darien! I love the fact that you ended it with hope.. Nicely chosen words and a wonderful flow... Great job! |
by Little Dot
Wow, beautiful job. It has such strong emotion. What an amazing job on this poem. I can really relate to it. |