by Tammie Apr 15, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I wish that you'd love me |
by Jenni Marie
WOW, so powerful, so sad and yet so sweet. Doesn't love make a girl insane. Excellent job. |
Aww. I liked it a lot. I mostly liked the last 2 lines. It gave the poem a dark side, as well as a loving side. The flow was a little off in places, but it was over all very well written. =) 5/5 xoxo |
by Sammib
AWESOME!!! I really like this. Feel your pain and know that it heals with time... so you go out there, hold your head high, look the darkness in the face and say "you will not defeat me"!! |