AWESOME!!! I really like this. Feel your pain and know that it heals with time... so you go out there, hold your head high, look the darkness in the face and say "you will not defeat me"!!
God bless

Sammib

Aww. I liked it a lot. I mostly liked the last 2 lines. It gave the poem a dark side, as well as a loving side. The flow was a little off in places, but it was over all very well written. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

WOW, so powerful, so sad and yet so sweet. Doesn't love make a girl insane. Excellent job.