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  • 18 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    I like it. Good job. I feel that alot too. great way of capturing the feelin.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nikki McKay

    Good writing girl,keep it up
    i really liked this poem

  • 18 years ago

    by *kAnDiE*

    5/5
    I loved it... Great job!! I totally can relate too this! Keep up the great work and check out some of my stuff sometime if u want...
    x0x0
    *kAnDiE*

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very well written peice, sure a lot of people can realate to thsi feeling. it is written very well with a good flow and holds the readers inteeest thoughout. you may want to edit a few of the words though where the apostraphies arre meant to be

  • 18 years ago

    by Lollypop

    This is really good Skye! you can relate to people really well. Love Ya!
    *Laura M*

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    "Hidden from my happy life
    Is how ill always be"

    loved these last two lines---great poem