*wipes a tear*
Sniff, that twas bee-a-u-tee-ful Markness!!
I loveed it all duuuuude.
Well done!
Your getting betteh as a poet..WHOOT!!

Teehee.

Ttyl.
x

Aww.... it was a really touching poem! I almost cried! It made me think of alot of things. well anyways your poem was really sweet! I loved it! Keep it up! ^_^

Mark, gretski again
lol sorry
but this poem, most out of all your work, relates to me. sometimes by the closest people around me i feel i try so hard and no body recognises that.
one of a kind i think..
xx

There were some spelling errors, maybe two, and it seemed a bit cliche. The concept is strong though and so is the meaning. How people don't really notice what's in front of their faces, right? I just think you're wording was a bit off when it's clear this does have potential to stand out.

"To fly away, with the beauty of a dove."

This line was beautiful and what I loved about the poem was how natural it seemed. Awesome...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Wow... that was a beautiful poem, and I know how you feel.
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I try hard to be nice and kind to you,
But it's these things.. you see right through.
I'll never be good, never enough for you to see,
But this was.. truly meant to be.
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