This is a really great poem...:)...keep writing

Nice poem jessie! Beautifully written with so much feelings and emotions beneath the surface.

Very well done, it's very sad though =*(

Read you profile info.. Personally I think a person is strong when they show their weaknesses.

Take good care of yourself

Lotsaaaaa love
-xxx-

Very nice, well done.
&& i know the feeling all to well i give you 5/5.

Hi Jessie This Is A Very Good Poem..It Expresses Alot Of Feeling..And Alot Of People Can Relate To It..It Is Sad Though=( Thx For The Comment On My Poem, Meant Alot To Me. Anyways Cya!

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Good poem! I can see it meant a lot for you to write. It had some emotion in it, and I could almost feel it, because I can relate to it so much. I also liked the ending sentence. Very fit. Keep up your good work, and thank you for your comment.

5/5 !!
^^ Wondefull, though feels slightly unfinished? Anywho this is a sweet poem ^^ Conitnue please ^________^