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by manic moments Apr 15, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / about death
I'm sorry I said those words angrily I'm sorry if they hurt you deeply I am truly sorry, really Please reply me, quickly Don't look at me like that I didn't mean them! I know that for a fact That they weren't used to condemn Put the razor down Stop it! Please! You don't need your pain to be shown No more scars need to climb your arms and knees! I know you're sad Don't whisper something you don't mean Just get really mad Show the anger that needs to be seen You said to never bottle up The feelings that are true and real Don't tell me to shut up I need to know the things you feel Where are you? Don't go! What am I going to do? Hello! After I found you Slumped over the bath The paramedics came without do You have been dead an hour and a half Your pain was so strong That you didn't notice why you're sad Depression didn't last long Everything has gone badPLease comment on this poem, I would like to know what you all think and see if I need to improve.