by Danielle
Awww ur poem is soo cute! |
by Gracie Jo
Awh, hey bert. =) i've missed reading your poetry. great job here. thanks for the comment, you made me smile. i'm doing good, how about you? take care. |
by dora
Hey beautifully written this p0em itwas great. a t0uching piece. thank u heapz f0r ur kind w0rds 0n my p0em - ive been g0od, just busy with sk0ol n stuff. neway keep up the great w0rk!!! =] |
by aDORKable x3
That was a very nice poem thanks for the comment...never ask yourself why they don't love you, ask who will love you for who you are! =) |
by Chelsey
Oh I loved this poem! THat first stanza really got me interested which is a great thing in poetry because you need to grab the readers attention! I absolutley loved this write! You expressed your emotions very well and point taken! |
by Eibutsina
This is full of desperation , emotion and confusion - all which encompass the feeling we know as love...your poetry is always such a pleasure to read my friend...This piece took me back to a faint memory of a time long ago when I once felt the same...great write great use of your emotion |
by rar
This is a very good poem. i cant wait to read more of you poems. i jsut really love the way u write. good job. keep it up. |
by Nee
Ur poem was really awesome!! moved me to tears actually!!! |
by p4y5c0
Hey this was like maybe the best poem i have ever read its a wonderful poem i loved it! you did a wonderful job on this poem keep up all the great talent you have! |
by ~Samantha~
I so loved it!!..Keep up the great work...i give u 5/5... |
by ~Amanda~
Very well done, i luved how u began the poem it wus great! |
by bethan
THATS such a beautiful poem! |
by Robie Lincer
Thats a very nice poem! yet it was confusing in a way ! but filled with emotions and love! |