Fantastic write! it's beautiful. i particularly like the lines:

"...Wind is dying as we call their names
In empty fields of broken hearts
And we laugh, for all the world to see
Because pride hides sorrow to ones such as we..."

"...Beyond waterfalls and rainbows
Upon a word, one final song
We searched for meaning in hearts of stone
Amongst loneliness, and scattered bone..."

"...We dwell beyond hope, beyond feeling
As the rain echoes softly, a melancholy keening..."

"...It makes no sense.
But despair is our only form of defense..."

excellent write, keep it up!!
-hannah

This is an awsum poem!