I Don't Care At All.

by facedownindirt   Apr 15, 2006


"Are you sure you don't mind?"
You questioned.
"Yeah. I don't care at all.
You'd be better with him."
As I felt a tear fall.

"No. You're crying! Forget it. It's okay".
"Listen! Really it's fine," I commanded.
"It'd be better this way."

"Look, you and him are perfect,"
I told.
"It's like you're met to be."
I smiled.
"Not anything like just him and me."

"But you love him!"
You shouted.
I whispered, "Not anymore."
You looked confused,
"Really! I'm sure!"

"Please don't miss your chance.
He's a wonderful guy.
I'll be fine if you take him...
...I won't even cry."

You then stood up,
and sighed.
Being really relieved,
"Thanks." You said.
It was another lie you believed.

You ran out the door,
and left me behind.
With my fake smile,
that poorly shined.

"Yeah, it'd be better this way."
I softly repeated.
Knowing that this one boy,
was really all I needed.

But I tore threw the picture,
of me and him.
Then riped myself in two.
Knowing I'd never be a person...
...a person as great as you.

-This is a new style for me. I always try to write in perfect rhythm and like to have my rhyming done in AB CB order. I also usually never put dialog in my writing, which I did a lot of in this one. I like the change, but only if everyone else likes it too. So it would really be wonderful if you could comment on this one to tell me what you think! Thanks so much.-

_*Morgan*_

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  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    This is what I'd like to call amazing talent, Morgan. You're extremely talented.

  • 18 years ago

    by .:Alexandria:.

    I like the style it just a little confusing for me but i still understood it good enough i think lol