THE SCAR...

by PURE HEART   Apr 15, 2006


Every night thinking of you,
i weep, i cry, i die.
Every night i miss you so much,
just looking at the silent sky.

Standing at my window pane,
i look at the beauty of sky.
Thats moon- so quite, so calm,
i feel like spending the whole night.

Then i ask the sky- did anyone got hurt more than me?
my heart is broken and my feelings are dead, can you see?
The sky remains silent and quite,
showing me the moon scattering the white light.

May be the sky wants to tell me,
that moon is also with million of stars.
But his beloved has also left him,
that's why he carries with him - The Scar...

*** i wrote it just looking at sky and wondering that why the moon is with scars?***

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow.. very good poem! it was amazing! you are a very good poet! keep it uP!
    jessy xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Brooke

    This is a very lovely poem!!! Very creative.

    Much love

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow, this was like someone is writing on me..lol
    I totally know what you mean as thats y lately even i hv been writing a lot abt moon, there are so many hidden facts a moon has...u just keep looking at it and u'll be full of thoughts. its a wonderful feeling, trust me, keep looking at it everytime u get an opportunity.

    beautiful poem, very nicely xpressed

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Wow that a awsum poem i like it alot...u got me wondering too. nice one.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Hey,

    I must say, the topic was very well chosen.. it fit into the theme of the poem very nicely.. I loved how it makes the reader observe and think about the night time sky...
    Great work..
    5/5

    Much Love,
    Ipsita

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