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Off to the right there lies a city
Full of the great achievements of man
But I would gladly trade all these away
For the warmth and comfort of your hand

Behind me lies the vastness of the world
Created perfect by God's own hand
But still I would give it all
If beside you I could stand

Awesome stanza's ^^ Really great write - I can relate, and it's pictured so beautiful, the use of perfect imagery really brings the poem to life.

Peace. [Sole]

Wow ! wat an amazing poem !
5/5
nothin less...
its a wonderful poem
so picturesque...
great work
love
amy

Everything about this poem is not only romantic but kind of magical. I love it when someone can write a love poem without it sounding cliche. It kept mya ttention all the way through. And kind of makes me wish I had somebody to write a poem like that about me lol

The rhyming pattern you've used works really well here and i love the way each stanza is introduced, good work. xx

Really good rhyems, flow.
it is really good love poem... keep that good work.
5/5

Amazing poem, amazing imagery, amazing emotion and love...whoever you wrote this for, is VERY lucky. probably one of the best love poems I've ever read. keep up the excellent work...

A beautiful, amazing poem.... the sweetest thing i've read for a long while. 5/5

Beautiful Poem :)

keep it up :)

5/5

Melody