"A fear of rejection, encompasses me.
From now, to the end of my days,
because I know that my one true flaw,
will surpass me in every game."

I really liked that part....really i did..it relates to me...lol...keep it up

Good poem

You found a way taht most people would be able to relate to this poem besides the idea of out flaws being too much. Alot of us have heard that story about Cyrano so we can get a good mental image from that. I think your last sentence was your strongest. It tied it together.

"External imperfections"
everyones got em
and you get a 5/5

Wow! u used huge words! that's crazy. i had to look up some of them, but the poem was wonderful! 5/5
#4 bibi aishite imas

I can understand easely what you wrote there, so it's very well written :)
good poetry
keep it up