Very good peice, good flow thoughout and the similarity of the first line of each stanza works very well to pull the entire piece together.

5/5

This was kinda like reading the middle chunk of a poem.
But i love the instinctive attraction and that i have to put my own thoughts into it.

Lv A, xxx

At first, I thought it was going to be another cheap love poem. But at the last stanza - the rest of the poem came into a complete picture. Very well written.

Peace. [Sole]

It seemed like reading the middle of a poem instead of a whole one. It didnt feel all that complete. It did attract attention, though witht hte title and kept it through the poem and the last stanza seemed the strongest.

P.S I agree: Down voters get a life