A piece of fallen effort

by Sara   Apr 15, 2006


One day I looked into the mirror
What do you see, Sara?? I asked myself
I see a girl whose love is pure
and heart is warm
A girl who always helps with anything
Anytime, anywhere
I see a girl aching from perfection
And sometimes let down
And left crying
A girl who always climbs the hill again
Whenever she has fallen
And to fall is not to loose
Cause when you fall
it means you've climbed up high
Never to climb is to loose
And this girl never looses
I see a girl who tries to make it better
But it is never seen
A girl who lies an effort
In making people feel complete
But I also see a girl who sometimes
Forgets to make herself complete
And is that not a piece of fallen effort?
To forget yourself and who you are?
I see a girl who know she has to make it better
For her own sake
And perhaps also for others
But I also see a girl who can look herself in the eyes
And say: honey, this is a piece of fallen effort...

Sorry about the English, I am from Denmark...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Great job here as well, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Noname

    Wow this is really great
    =]
    keepp it up