I Still Love You

by Bridgette   Apr 15, 2006


The smiles cover up the emptiness in my heart
Trying to make you think I'm alright
But everything I am is just falling apart

Time has no meaning to me anymore
I have all the time in the world to wait for you
Cause with every breath I take, I only miss you more

The pain in my heart only grows as days pass
I'm completely trapped in my sorrow
As I quietly watch you move on too fast

Your memory is all I have left of you
I'll cherish it forever
I guess that's all that I can do

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  • 18 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    This poem was really great! I can relate to it a lot! I loved how it flowed! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    I liked ths one so muchhh,its fantastic..and i read "BROKEN"too..its incredible..ur words so strong and sad..ur style in writin very amazin..keep up da good work..wish u all da best..5/5..

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    I agree ^^ The flow was a little off at times, but it's an impressive meaning, not the deepest poem, but the rhyming is good, I liked the original structure - it suited the poem well.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    It's really good. It could have gone more in depth but ut's fine as is. I don't know about the, "I only miss you more." part. It seemed a bit overdone in the past, but the rest of the poem does stand pretty good on it's own. Didn't really see any seplling mistakes or anything either.

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