Wow thats amazing. it gave me the chills. i really feel that. every line is well thought out and deep. great!

Omg how can sum people just make there poem come to life? ....answer me that question becasue you are one of those people.....plx return the favour and somment on my peoms ....thank you
XoX 2moroNEVAcame

That was such a deep poem, it's rare to find something that keeps you thinking - a poem that puts a perfect scene straight inside your head, as if the place itself were real. Really amazing poetry, one of your best by far.

Peace. [Sole]

Aw wow. This was really good Kaylee! You're a really great writer!! I hope you don't ever stop writing, cause you're great at it. I loved this poem, It was so deep, And it had a good meaning behind it. Keep it up 5/5

luv natalie x-x

I agree with my1&only you really are a great poet with so much talent so you should consider publishing =) amazing poem , it told 3 storys in once and so well written that i couldnt stop reading, its amazing to something like this to a reader and you got it =)

~StefQ

WOW, kali that was amazing, I loved the end stanza especially but that write was just wow, to be honest I got a bit confused when the line ended like halfway and then began again on the next one down but that might just be me, this was without a doubt an astounding poem, it was everything a poem should be heartfelt, gripping and exciting, it left me wanting to read more of your work which is a clever thing to be able to do, well done to you!

Wow the imagery is excellent and the structure is very original and works really well, i like the repetition of the 'already dead/already knowing/already longing'. and the way u used the 'mirrror mirror on the wall' but changed it. very nice. xx

With a poem of this size keeping the reader gripped till the end. Not sure how to help you on it, but still well done with the poem

Amazing poem... i just couldnt stop reading...
keep up the great work
pls find time to comment on murder or suicide
love
amy

Excellent write, perfect ending!

"His intense eyes melting the heavens above his head,
then he saw me there. Already longing."
^^^ Love these lines, awesome job!

I love your poem

This isn't really my type of poems... but I have to admit, I really enjoyed reading it. I love the last part of the poem. I'm very impressed. You did great 5/5

- Thanks for reading my poem -

~ Tina

Wow! This was an excellent write! It captured me from the beginning to the end with three different stories which dove so well into my heart. Once again it was a great poem. It wasn't particularly my type, but I must admit it captured me from beginning to the end. Keep it up. 5/5

That poem was amazing!! Words just cannot even describe it. I loved it. The flow was amazing & it was very descriptive. Great job! 5/5*

This was nice. I liked it alot. 5/5

I really like your style of writing. I love the vocabulary you use in your poems instead of just keeping with the general bland words that so many other people repeat. Your poems create such great immages in my mind and I really like how they tell storries and just pull me in. =) great job.

It was a graet poem
it was really spooky.

Wow, I like your style love, it is really brilliant loaded with discription and slowly telling the story at your own pace, leaving the reader grabbing at each word. There are so many stories out there of insiration and downfall, both equally important and all needed to be shared. As a writer some times I just want to stop the whole world for a while so I can step back and begin again to record their beautiful stories of life, and what the did with their own. Sadly time rarely complies, so I am left picking up the tid bits of these beautiful stories, filling in what I don't know with experiences of my own. A brilliant poem hunni.

-Tainted

I am really amazed, your poems are really good, i can really get into them, its so great to do that. Love em
Tara xx

This was a nice poem..a little long...but a real meaning...
~*Linz*~