OH MY LORD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFGFAJDFASFKLJAFFADKLJADL:FA:JKLJFA:!!!

INCREDIBLE!!

i took the time to read this whole thing even though I'm at a hotel and I'm sneaking on a computer!!! LOL!!

So...that's exactly why I dont think i can talk to Hailie! I WISH!....its just I'm trying to find a house in Virginia this week and fdlajfkldajdfaa. rawr. SOooooooooooo frustrating!! But..please. Send her my love!!!!!!!!! awww,
amazing...magnificent...incredible poem!!!!! I wish I had your writing skills..your vocabulary is INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!!!
omfg. I'm stunned.

How could they not feel pain and hurt
and despise their pointless lives
All my life I have been striving,
Surviving in a place of hate and lies''-

This poem is amazing. I loved the fact it was so long. I read it slower and took it in more. Really, truly good poetry.

Sometimes with long poems the ending get rushed. This is so not the case for you.

;) Lv Avellana, xxx

I would be a lier if I were to call this poem bad. This was really very heartfelt, and well written, long or not it really doesn't matter. Using first point of view was a brilliant touch to this poem love, it really added a lot to feel the things she did, to see life through her swollowed tear filled eyes. I was hanging onto every word and I even caught my own eyes watering. I really loved this poem. Thank you for the sweet and kind comments you left on my poems.

-Tainted Mikochan